Aki really didn’t like riding in cars. The smell inside of them made her feel sick.

One day, her mom was driving her and her brother, Ziibiin, to their hockey practices. Even though the car had been cleaned, Aki thought it smelled like rotten bananas.

After 10 minutes, Aki couldn’t handle it anymore. She leaned over and took some coloured candy from Ziibiin and stuck a few in each of her nostrils.

“You look ridiculous!” he told her.

“Yes, but I can’t smell the car smell anymore! It’s ahhh…”, said Aki

“Ahhh, what? Ahhhmazing?”, asked Ziibiin.

“AhhhhhCHOOO!”. Aki grabbed some tissue as she sneezed the candy out of her nose.

Aki and Ziibiin looked at the tissue and to their surprise…

Story Endings

butterfly10

The candy was not candy anymore! It was leaves! Oh no her mom couldn’t see! Her mom tried to pull over but she went the wrong way! Nearly hit another car and then was in the ditch! Looks like we won’t make it to hockey! After that her mom always left the window open and hardly ever brought Aki in the car!

Jun 16
mrman

the tissue started growing a face.When it was finished it started screaming so loud that the whole car EXPLODED.Aki was so happy she started blowing up other people’s cars.Then she needed to sneeze.She used the tissue.Then she exploded.

Jun 16
junf3770

it exploded! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Jun 16
crigul61

The coloured candy became yellow tiny butterflies that started dancing inside the car and the amazing surprise is that the smell of the car didn’t bother Aki anymore.

Aki and her brother tried to count the amount of yellow tiny butterflies but they couldn’t do it. I seems the more they try to count them the more butteries were dancing around their heads.

Suddenly, Aki’s mom draw down the windows and all the butterflies flew out. To Aki’s surprise the smell of the care had disappear.

Jun 16
parapparapper

It was broken! Aki flew in the air and brung a song like this: “Ding dong, ping pong, it is time, for the best part of bestie gals and guys..” Aki sang. Ziibiin was really confused. “I said, what is really ahhmazing. Can you answer me?” Ziibiin swooped into his pocket and then the note said: “DEAR ZIIBIIN, COME TO MY PARTY AT 3:00 PM TO 6:00 PM. I WILL GIVE OUT YUMMY CAKE FOR YOU! YOURS TRULY, ZIGGY” Ziibiin said “Mom, where are we driving to really? It is 3:03 PM already and we are late for the party.” Mom said “We arrived at the indoor playground. Go have some fun kids!” Ziibiin and Aki had some fun. The end.

Jun 15
danecute06

there was a big candy comes out from the tissue and all of them burst into laughter and ate the candy. The end.

Jun 15
bookworm2011

the candy was covered in rainbows

Jun 15
super2008

the candy was magical and cured her sickness

Jun 15
sahar101

OMG look at that store!!! It’s full of candy!!🍭

Jun 15
raihana123

she was not sick any more

Jun 15
daniel4538

cotton candy floated down from the top of the car. Before it could fall on the car’s floor, they ate it all. Aki felt better.

Jun 15
divine4life

It turned into cotton candy and the candy got stuck into the cotton candy. After that Aki was feeling better

Jun 15
ne

then he ate the candy the end

Jun 15
shabadoo

… cotton candy floated down from the top of the car. Before it could fall on the car’s floor, they ate it all. Aki felt better.

Jun 15