The House of the Twelve Keys

By Kevin Sylvester

Chapter 11

Part 11. The Haunted Hallway

“We’re back in the hallway!” Raj said.

Not only that, but the front door was wide open. The storm had passed and brilliant sunshine flooded the room. Birds sang in the trees. Freedom was just a few steps away.

“WHOOP!” Pat yelled. She turned and began sprinting down the wooden floor. Raj was about to follow, when he thought back to the monster’s last warning.

After the computer, the monster had said there were only three challenges left. The piggy bank was one. And then….

“WAIT!” Raj yelled. “IT’S A TRAP!”

But he was too late. Pat stepped on the old carpet near the door. It suddenly gave way and she and the carpet tumbled into a deep black hole. Raj ran to the edge. “PAT!” he called, but it was as if the gloom simply swallowed up the sound.

He got to his knees. He felt around the hole. It was cold. The darkness was complete. He couldn’t see any trace of Pat or the carpet. With a creak, the trap door began to close slowly.

A bird began singing outside. A beautiful song. A meadowlark, Raj thought. He and Pat had listened to some bird songs in the library’s multimedia room.

Raj turned and looked. The bird landed on the doorstep and beckoned him to follow. Raj looked longingly at the sunny outdoors. It would be so easy to walk around the trap door, and then sprint the final few feet to the doorway. He could escape. An image of Pat falling passed in front of his eyes.

The bird sang louder and the image vanished.

Raj stood up, almost hypnotized. It was like he could see himself running free across the lawn and to the library. Pat could save herself, right?

“NO!” he yelled. He pointed at the bird, who stopped singing. “Sorry bird, but friends don’t leave friends behind.”

The bird scowled at Raj. But Raj didn’t care. Pat was in trouble. The monster had said the last challenge was the worst, and Pat was already there. “Maybe that’s the key to this stupid hallway,” Raj said to the bird. “Testing me?”

Without saying another word he stepped into the hole. Time seemed to stop for a second as Raj hovered in mid-air.

There was a loud howl from the air around him. Then the trap door swung fully open and Raj fell, faster and longer than he ever thought possible.

He landed with a thud on a cold, stone floor. The darkness seemed darker and thicker than he’d ever experienced.

And somewhere in the room nearby he could hear Pat whispering over and over, “We’re doomed.”

Do you think Raj made the right choice by stepping into the hole to find Pat? 

Comments

dogman2

It was a dangerous choice but he wanted to save pat

Aug 03
eshanabobana

I think he is totally putting himself to risk. But that’s what friends do. THEY LOOK OUT FOR EACH OTHER!!!!!!!

Aug 02
cham42

that was really not the best choice.

Jul 31
bookworm12

I think it was not bad but not good desicion because Raj wants to help Pat but , he is also may be putting himself at a risk .

Jul 31
yan

i love the … everything

Jul 30
sagless

Cool Book

Jul 30
jj5

Yes.

Jul 29
lucy11

ABSOLUTELY!!!

Jul 29
sweetpea7

yes

Jul 29
yayyammoto

Good book

Jul 28
bluedolphin3

Totally

Jul 28
cutezozo

Of course!

Jul 28
lizzie6

Totally!

Jul 27
explodingkittin

Absolutely! He did it for a friend.

Jul 26
reading9

Yes. Friends help friends.

Jul 26
kate1

Yes

Jul 26
merpup

I think so?

Jul 25
izzybee

YES!

Jul 25
cailbear

Yes because it is his friend.

Jul 25
lucy11

YES!!!

Jul 24
yellowfang22

ya because why not?

Jul 24
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