The House of the Twelve Keys

By Kevin Sylvester

Chapter 11

Part 11. The Haunted Hallway

“We’re back in the hallway!” Raj said.

Not only that, but the front door was wide open. The storm had passed and brilliant sunshine flooded the room. Birds sang in the trees. Freedom was just a few steps away.

“WHOOP!” Pat yelled. She turned and began sprinting down the wooden floor. Raj was about to follow, when he thought back to the monster’s last warning.

After the computer, the monster had said there were only three challenges left. The piggy bank was one. And then….

“WAIT!” Raj yelled. “IT’S A TRAP!”

But he was too late. Pat stepped on the old carpet near the door. It suddenly gave way and she and the carpet tumbled into a deep black hole. Raj ran to the edge. “PAT!” he called, but it was as if the gloom simply swallowed up the sound.

He got to his knees. He felt around the hole. It was cold. The darkness was complete. He couldn’t see any trace of Pat or the carpet. With a creak, the trap door began to close slowly.

A bird began singing outside. A beautiful song. A meadowlark, Raj thought. He and Pat had listened to some bird songs in the library’s multimedia room.

Raj turned and looked. The bird landed on the doorstep and beckoned him to follow. Raj looked longingly at the sunny outdoors. It would be so easy to walk around the trap door, and then sprint the final few feet to the doorway. He could escape. An image of Pat falling passed in front of his eyes.

The bird sang louder and the image vanished.

Raj stood up, almost hypnotized. It was like he could see himself running free across the lawn and to the library. Pat could save herself, right?

“NO!” he yelled. He pointed at the bird, who stopped singing. “Sorry bird, but friends don’t leave friends behind.”

The bird scowled at Raj. But Raj didn’t care. Pat was in trouble. The monster had said the last challenge was the worst, and Pat was already there. “Maybe that’s the key to this stupid hallway,” Raj said to the bird. “Testing me?”

Without saying another word he stepped into the hole. Time seemed to stop for a second as Raj hovered in mid-air.

There was a loud howl from the air around him. Then the trap door swung fully open and Raj fell, faster and longer than he ever thought possible.

He landed with a thud on a cold, stone floor. The darkness seemed darker and thicker than he’d ever experienced.

And somewhere in the room nearby he could hear Pat whispering over and over, “We’re doomed.”

Do you think Raj made the right choice by stepping into the hole to find Pat? 

Comments

jenna8

Yes!But maybe there was a more safe place to go.

Jul 09
sillycat2699

Yes.Just as Raj said friends do not leave friends behind.

Jul 09
anikaisawesome

Yes he did not want to leave his friend

Jul 09
gingersnap11

Yes, it would’ve been selfish to go without Pat, which makes me believe that Raj was the only one to take the last challenge and it will be revealed in the next chapter (I think).

Jul 09
connorab

yes

Jul 09
rebekah

nope because stories usually end well and next chapter is the last chapter

Jul 09
summerflower

yes because he did not want to leave his friend behind and just go

Jul 09
firestar

Yes and no depends on what’s there.We won’t know for sure until we read the next chapter.

Jul 09
meghanp

yes

Jul 09
sparkles1357

Yes because it would be really rude for Raj to leave her behind

Jul 09
sportscanread

Well he did if pat was his only friend but he might end up risking his life

Jul 09
minion25

yes and the monster said the last challenge was the worst

Jul 09
shinykittens786

Yes because they could escape by finding the twelfth key and they could finally be able to go to the library

Jul 08
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