The Best Thing Ever

Rajnie, Francis, and Rafael are at their local mall after school on a Friday when they decide to watch a movie.

When the movie finishes, they decide to walk around the mall again. They notice that the mall is extremely quiet and wonder why there are no other people around. They try to exit the mall, but find that the door is locked. They try another exit, but that too is locked. They walk around the mall searching for other exits, but then all of a sudden they realize that they are trapped in the mall!

“Eeee! This is the best thing ever!!!” Rajnie squeals with excitement.

Rafael replies…

Story Endings

kaur

I would love to go and the I always wanted! Then they wandered of to the stores. Soon they met at same place and had bags full of stuff they wanted. Rajnie said, “That it is wrong to take stuff from stores without paying”. Francis and Rafael said, “Yeah”. Then they the things back and came back to the same place. Suddenly people started to appear and they also saw their parents. Then a person came up and said, “Good job for not stealing stuff”. Their parent were so proud of them! THE END!

Jul 15
gb

This is the best thing ever! We can go to the ice cram store and eat all of it!

Jul 15
po44

Why always me?Francis says I need to cookie so he does it on the floor. The end

Jul 14
wolves

“What should WE do first!?” “We should go to the makeup and fashion department,”Francis squealed “We should go to the candy store” said Rajnie all hyped up “Hold up,lets go where ever we like and when were done we’ll meet back up here” Rafael said “Oh,also leave money for whatever we get” Francis added “Yup,we don’t wanna commit a crime”Rafael said.They met back in a hour “Latest trend!”said Francis “Candy!”Rajnie said “Movies!” Rafael added “How are we going to get out?”Francis said in horror “Hmm,lets just walk” “I FOUND AN EXIT!”Rafael yelled.They got out and climbed a tree “Best day ever!”they all said The End C:

Jul 14
ally2

we can do whatever we want let’s get those new toys and take some ice crème and OMG lets get everything they all said YEAH!!!!!

Jul 14
booklover407

“Are you thinking what I´m thinking?” Then at the same time all the friends reply…” THE CHOCOLATE SHOP!!”Then all of them race to to shop just to find that it was locked.” Are you kidding me?” Francis whines.” Don´t worry,I got this!” says Rajnie. she picks out a hair pin and unlocks the door. Then they each help themselves to chocolate until they were full THE END

Jul 13
nikkimaxwell

“OMG!! let’s go to the toy shop and play with some brand new toys” Yeah! Then, we can go to the ice - cream shop and get a treat, though we will leave the money for our treat on the counter.” said Francis. “YEAH!!” said all three together.

Jul 13
oliver7

this is awesome !!!!they eat all night.

Jul 13
parhamnour

Were inside the Theatre still

Jul 12
user747

how is this the best thing EVER.because you can see sooooooo much new toys and food and many others . but we cant buy anything . o yeah . i forgot nooooooo we are traped . o i know something its going to be fun . we can play hide and seek . yay this is the best thing EVER

Jul 12
pinkhat24

How can you say that because we are stuck here. What are we going to do !!!

Jul 12
idoit

then all of the world turned black!

Jul 12
debnath

With a exclamation mark!

Jul 12
hma1234

I think it would end it “Rajnie are you out of your mind we don’t know we are going to do Rafael replied “

Jul 12
crazycatlover11

We can post this on YouTube of “24 hours in a mall challenge”, and Rajnie reply’s OMG that’s such an amazing idea but the problem is, we don’t have a YouTube channel” so Rafael went on his iPad and created a new YouTube channel called “Adventures with Rajnie and Rafael” so they started doing doing whatever they wanted, but when it was morning they heard footsteps and hid in a shop for a while, and when the coast was clear they ran out of the mall but when the where JUST 1 feet away to exit the doors they got caught… don don dooonnn but the cops let them off easily and told Rajnie and Rafael to NEVER do this again! The end, hope you liked my story :)

Jul 12