The Best Thing Ever

Rajnie, Francis, and Rafael are at their local mall after school on a Friday when they decide to watch a movie.

When the movie finishes, they decide to walk around the mall again. They notice that the mall is extremely quiet and wonder why there are no other people around. They try to exit the mall, but find that the door is locked. They try another exit, but that too is locked. They walk around the mall searching for other exits, but then all of a sudden they realize that they are trapped in the mall!

“Eeee! This is the best thing ever!!!” Rajnie squeals with excitement.

Rafael replies…

Story Endings

adacat1

she wants to watch an other movie maybe!

Jul 28
kraftgrl

“we get the bathrooms all to ourself!”“yah, even the luxury ones!”exclaimed Francis. Lets go to the mini sleep country!” said Rajnie excitedly.” Thats were we can sleep!”“Okay, so…….. to the sleep country!”” Canada!”yelled Rafael.

Jul 28
kate1

I can use my Konssenegge to bust out of this building

Jul 27
dinari

Good

Jul 26
explodingkittin

Rafael replies, “I want a cookie!” “Now now now!” “No no no no,” replies Francis.”I hate malls”

After Francis finished talking Rafael ran away to find a cookie.He ran around quite crazily, like a monkey. “Well when we look for him we can go shopping!” Rajnie added having a little grin. Rajnie finished speaking and skipped of, grabbing a kart.

 They looked through aisle and aisle and couldn’t find Rafael. When Francis looked over at Rajnie, her kart was already full! When they looked over they saw a window. It was just at there reach! Rajnie lifted Francis over to the window latch so she could open it. She swung open the window and Rajnie climbed in after. They didn’t realize that they left Rafael behind.
Jul 26
cheech

'’How lucky are we that this is the biggest mall in Alberta!’‘says Rafael.’‘we can go shopping for free ,but first lets go to galaxyland! ,says Francis. We can take turns operating the rides! So the group headed to galaxyland ‘‘Lets go on the mind bender first!,says Raginie,but no one else wanted to go so Francis operated it while Rajnie took a ride. After a lot more rides they went shopping,then made their way to the fantasyland hotel and spent the night. In the morning they each hopped a taxi home.

Jul 25
jojo06

How could we get stuck in here? It is in possible! Francis can you check what time it is please cause I’m freaking out! The only I’m scared of is my parents. There going to be horrified. It is nine o’clock and were still here. I’m almost going to cry!

Jul 24
kayla25

How? We are trapped here and are going to have to sleep here by ourselves! Our parents are going to be so worried about us and I don’t even have anything to get a hold of them which makes it worse! I can’t believe this happened

Jul 24
lissa

yeah lets go get lost.

Jul 24
kevin8

Hop on I am going to use my Konssenegge to burst out of the mall. The Konssenegge is to fast for police.

Jul 23
superreader501

“Oh no! I always hated the mall, but now I’m STUCK in one? This is a complete nightmare!” “Just stay calm guys,” said Francis, “Number 1: Rajnie, you will NOT go break in every shops windows and go shopping-“ “Hold on a minute! Who said I was gonna break in every shop to go shopping?” said Rajnie. “Well, it is pretty likely for you to do that…” Rafael said. “OK whatever,” said Francis, “And also, Rafael, don’t freak out.Think of this as an adventure!” And so the three friends went looking around the mall for security guards. While they were doing that, Rafael heard a growl. “Did you hear that?” “What?” said Rajnie. “Grrrrrrrr” something growled. “That!” Rafael screamed. “Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! A monster!!!” they all said at the same time. “Run!” said Francis. “Wait!” said the monster. “I just wanna help you!” “Come with me,” the monster said. She jumped out a window and became a marshmallow and they all jumped on her and landed safe and sound. “Thanks a million,Marshmallow!”

Jul 23
shinykittens786

ARE YOU INSANE!?SCREAMS Rafael. Well,we can stay here steal whatever we want said Rajnie shrugging. OUR PARENTS WILL KILL US IF DON’T GET OUTTA HERE!!!Yelled Francis. OKAY OKAY ,said Rajnie realising he was outnumbered. So,when we got out of the movies the mall was closed,but the doors of the movies were opened! So maybe there is an exit in the theatre for an emergency!continued Francis. Well,we gotta hurry ,or the doors of the theatre might close said Rajnie starting to run in the direction of the movies.They made it just in and when they got out ,all the three friends gasped. IT CAN’T BE!screamed Francis in terror the world was just like the movie they had watched.Dinosaurs were chasing the citezens and causing havoc.But luckily it all stopped in a few minutes and the three friends went home.THE END!AND PLEASE LIKE☺!

Jul 23
adel

Rafael replied saying that this is bad. They looked around the mall again and found everybody was frozen. Then Francis touched one of the frozen people then suddenly a bright beam came and then Francis was frozen as well. Then Rajnie and Rafael was frozen as well. THE END

Jul 22
hermione

” No. This is the worst thing ever. Mom and dad will yell at me and I will get in trouble. So will you guys.” Then they walk to the movies but the movies are locked up. “ Now what do we do? There was an exit in the movies. We should of never came in to the mall.”says Francis. They go to the m,ain desk to find someone standing at the desk waiting for them.” Hello my friends. I have been expecting you. In Soft Moc you will find a key to the doors. You have 25 minutes.” They look around.the mall. “ Hey! There is no Soft Moc!” But the man is gone. They look around the whole mall and they find some fire doors. Then they escaped the mall and went home. “ Oh goodness you are safe. We where worried.”” We are fine”. And they always use the exit to outside in the movies. The End.

Jul 22
buttsyboobear

“But there’s no food here, so how are we going to survive?”

Francis says “well, we can break out of one of the doors, kick the glass, and we’ll be out.”

Rajnie says “but I wanted to stay here! Fine. I’ll go.”

The End.

Jul 22
blackpuppy2

Rafael replies”um rajnie this is the best thing ever!,but how are going to get out?”Then rajnie replied”we will figure it out later I’m pretty sure our parents are not worried but,for now let’s get some stuff!!!!!!Rafeal replied”Well ok…”Then,they split up but suddenly when rajnie was going inside the store NORDSTROM the door closed right before her eyes,she was terrified she almost peed her pants if someone was there she would obviously be embarrassed!!!!!!!!!😱Then out of nowhere a man with black eyes,black clothes and black hair appeared then she scram as hard as she can and rafeal came to rescue her he Kung fu chopped the man then the man turned out to be rajnie’s and rafeal’s father then she hugged him so much and they escaped out the window and came home.Then they lived happily ever after. THE END.

Jul 21
simonsays1

well this is not good

Jul 21
crystal_101

dude, this cant be happening my mom said I could finally watch t.v!

Jul 21
flowers13

“What! How is being stuck in a mall the best thing ever. Where is every body else?” Suddenly the mall door bursts open and Rafael, Rajnie and Francis run out side. THE END

Jul 21
izzy

Don’t steel anything.Ya might go to jail.In the end it was a dream.

Jul 21
matiasreadz

No this is terrible.Then they get a hammer and break through an exit.

Jul 21