ACHOO!
Aki really didn’t like riding in cars. The smell inside of them made her feel sick.
One day, her mom was driving her and her brother, Ziibiin, to their hockey practices. Even though the car had been cleaned, Aki thought it smelled like rotten bananas.
After 10 minutes, Aki couldn’t handle it anymore. She leaned over and took some coloured candy from Ziibiin and stuck a few in each of her nostrils.
“You look ridiculous!” he told her.
“Yes, but I can’t smell the car smell anymore! It’s ahhh…”, said Aki
“Ahhh, what? Ahhhmazing?”, asked Ziibiin.
“AhhhhhCHOOO!”. Aki grabbed some tissue as she sneezed the candy out of her nose.
Aki and Ziibiin looked at the tissue and to their surprise…
Story Endings
when she sneezed into the tissue out came a mix of the same candies put in (purple) and yellow sour keys. she only put in purple gumdrops. her brother kept putting candy up her nose and then they kept getting two times as many candies as they started with. Zibbin said, “look, there is orange fire outside.” Next to the fire, they see a tiger without black stripes. The tissue was clean!! but then when they came back from there hokey practice aki’s knee was bleeding so they went home and put a tissue on it to dry off the blood, but when they took it off there was no blood aki and ziibiin were shoked so they were thinking for over 3 hours how that happen but there was only one think that it could be said ziibiin what? said aki MAGIC he said aki was surprise that ziibiin said that but they went to a shop and they found this dress that is amazing said aki she booat it and put it on and this dress is magicl
it looked raccoon shaped! then when they got out of the car Aki was so happy she looked at the tissue it was square shaped! then put it in the car and it was raccoon shaped! then quickly took it back out it was square shaped again!that stinky old car is magic she exclaimed ! she got in and held the tissue and the car did not smell!
the end
when aki and ziibiin looked at the tissue the candies were a different colour like purple or green or yellow and they were so surprised so they threw the tissue out they did not want to see the candy after aki still could smell it so she took a tissue and covered her mouth with it
my explanation
there was some pepper in his pocket from last week! “oh so tats where it! oh silly me!” Aki said then Ziibiin said “ so there was pepper in your pocket this whole time! you could of warned me!” Then aki said”looks like a forgot hehehe” Ziibiin just glared Aki then put out a sigh and left the room. Next Aki thought. “Okay when your sick always check you pocket or else your friend WILL lose it”
The End!
The tissue did not have candy on it, it had strawberry’s on it “how did those get on there” Zibbin said. “I don’t know” said Aki, “I don’t even like strawberry’s” she said.
when she sneezed into the tissue out came a mix of the same candies put in (purple) and yellow sour keys. she only put in purple gumdrops. her brother kept putting candy up her nose and then they kept getting two times as many candies as they started with.
Zibbin said, “look, there is orange fire outside.” Next to the fire, they see a tiger without black stripes.
The tissue was clean!! but then when they came back from there hokey practice aki’s knee was bleeding so they went home and put a tissue on it to dry off the blood, but when they took it off there was no blood aki and ziibiin were shoked so they were thinking for over 3 hours how that happen but there was only one think that it could be said ziibiin what? said aki MAGIC he said aki was surprise that ziibiin said that but they went to a shop and they found this dress that is amazing said aki she booat it and put it on and this dress is magicl
the candy was replaced with a very metal box and inside there was a little robot! so when they got home the robot did Aki’s chores did Ziibiins dirty laundry and even took out the trash! but they kept it a secret from their mom so she does not figure out it is doing there chores for them!
Thar was nothing not even the candy Aki had sneezed out then the tishu disapeard wold it be like this forever?2 years passed and thar was still no tishu and what yo sneezed out disapeard i gess it wold be like that for ever
the evil germ wants to make them sick. They have to know idea what to do, so they ran away. They ran away so far, they ran back to their home.
She threw up so her mother took her home at home her mother took her temperature and said you have a fever you have to lie in bed Aki was feeling miserable she was sick and hot and she was throwing up every minute.
The candy-snot was alive! They were very mad at Aki for shoving them up her nose! She apologized and then found out that they were very friendly. They became best friends and their mother never found out.
The candies melted and let out little bubbles.Soon they popped and they cured Aki! Aki didn’t think that the car smelled like rotten Bananas anymore!
They saw a strong little cute animal that smelled grouse and his name was tim. Ali said that’s why the car smelled grouse .Tim said who said I smell grouse. Ali whispered no one and they all laved
So much more candy than they thought, more candy came out! Now Aki is called the candy monster and when she visits sick friends candy comes out!